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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Savor It

    Thanks so much for the review. :)

    Apr 29, 2025
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: It's In His Blood

    Thanks, Eros. I really appreciate it. This makes my day.

    Apr 29, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: The Man In The Moon

    Thank you so much. You have been very helpful. I appreciate any suggestions for improvements. I will look at this tomorrow and please feel free to share any specific suggestions ...

    Apr 29, 2025
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Hostage Forced to Write

    Thanks so much. I had line breaks in the draft, but it posted like this. It's taking some getting used to. Still trying to figure out how to change it.

    Apr 29, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: The Man In The Moon

    Aww thanks

    Apr 29, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: The Man In The Moon

    Thank you so much. The middle of the work is specifically describing the moon, personificating him as the man in the moon. Your words are so encouraging, and I'm thrilled ...

    Apr 29, 2025
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: It's In His Blood

    I'll definitely try that next time. Thank you

    Apr 28, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: The Dress

    Sure did

    Apr 27, 2025
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: It's In His Blood

    I had line spaces in my draft, so idk why it published like this. So sorry for the rough read. I didn't plan this one or anything. They just hit ...

    Apr 27, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: One runs the risk of crying a bit if one allows oneself to be tamed.

    I love this so much. I've always thought some horses were meant to roam free and wild. Why break their spirits? This reminds me of just that. It breaks my ...

    Apr 25, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Untitled

    Oh my gosh wow I absolutely love this. The ending brings such positivity and self growth while adding a fable in there of defining oneself. I just as well agree ...

    Apr 25, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Untitled

    Oh my gosh wow I absolutely love this. The ending brings such positivity and self growth while adding a fable in there of defining oneself. I just as well agree ...

    Apr 25, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Savor It

    Aww thank you, Ellie. The most important thing is you were happy reading. :)

    Apr 25, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: When you tell me to brush my tangled hair

    Young, carefree and wild at heart, this reminds me so much of myself and even my daughter. There's so many more things important on this earth than brushing through my ...

    Apr 25, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: When you tell me to brush my tangled hair

    Young, carefree and wild at heart, this reminds me so much of myself and even my daughter. There's so many more things important on this earth than brushing through my ...

    Apr 25, 2025


I will call them my people, which were not my people; and her beloved, which was not beloved.
— Romans 9:25