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Hello! welcome to the mighty brighty site of YWS!!!! Here to leave a quick review! Last chance, Yet fate said otherwise, It's interesting how you start with a line like ...

hi again JESUSGURL! here to review your very suspenseful piece! [My review method does not at all match the vibe of your piece so I apologize for that! 😅 ) ...

Helloo & a late welcome to YWS!! Ngl I tried creating a melody to sing this the very first time I read through it and it flowed really nice! I'm ...

hi cherie! I loved your thoughtfully-written poem; here for a short review in which I probably don't offer much but anyways: Loved

hi Bee Pollen & welcome to YWS! it must feel really painful to feel so unseen and not cared for, so invisible and maybe also disliked. I know I cannot ...

Hello @ Valkyria! Here to review your lovely romance piece! To preface, I have not read this entire series, but I'm eager to share my thoughts on this, even though ...

Aww what a beautiful poem! Also, hello Neovale, fellow poet, and welcome to YWS 😊! This poem reminded me of a lyric from a certain song that says, "I love ...

Hello there alliyah! Currently writing this at midnight because you know what they say, when inspiration strikes, inspiration strikes ! 😊😊 I saw this spiritual piece of poetry and knew ...

Hello cherie! I love how you took upon the humble perspective of a ladybug in this poem, highlighting how so many small animals and even ordinary items humans use are ...

Greetings FireEyes! Itsssssssss POETRY TIME! EEEEEK ok so LOVED 💖💖... - The alliteration of “dirty, devalued, disgusting” and how the speaker is proud to be an artist regardless of how ...

Helloooo palshlong! This won't exactly be a properly-formatted and detailed review, buttttt I loved your poem so I had to write somethinggg !😍 - Love the personification of passion (I'm ...

Hey there @creeperfeverdreams! I've seen your stories on yws for a while now and wanted to begin by reading some of your shorter pieces :) I'm not sure if this ...

Hey there @ImaginationWriter57 & welcome to YWS! This poem is really unique because you elaborated on the struggles faced by both genders, whereas most related poems I've read focus on ...

I must say, @LayLay2013, the rhyme scheme flows so naturally in this poem and you told a really powerful story through this! I can relate to having been a perfect, ...

Hey there L0ca1Tes1a! Here to [attempt to] review your masterpiece :) For starters, I love how you began the poem with a definition of the word repeated so many times ...