Verse 1
I saw you standing in the rain,
And suddenly I smiled again.
You looked my way, I looked away,
But thought about you all that day.
You said hello, I lost my mind,
A little moment, perfectly timed.
And though I tried to play it cool,
My heart forgot the golden rule.
Pre-Chorus
I don't know where this feeling goes,
But every day, somehow it grows.
I try to hide, I try to play,
But my heart gives me away.
Chorus
I'm falling, falling, falling for you,
Like morning skies turn brighter blue.
I'm dreaming, dreaming, dreams coming true,
And every road leads back to you.
If love's a song, then sing it loud,
I'll find your face inside the crowd.
Whatever comes, whatever we do,
I'm falling, falling, falling for you.
Verse 2
You make the stars look less than bright,
You make the wrong days feel alright.
You make me laugh, you make me stay,
You turn the dark into the day.
And when you smile, I lose my place,
I swear the whole world slows its pace.
I could pretend I don't care,
But you can see it everywhere.
Pre-Chorus
I don't know what tomorrow brings,
Or what the future's hiding in its wings.
But if your hand is close to mine,
Maybe everything will turn out fine.
Chorus
I'm falling, falling, falling for you,
Like morning skies turn brighter blue.
I'm dreaming, dreaming, dreams coming true,
And every road leads back to you.
If love's a song, then sing it loud,
I'll find your face inside the crowd.
Whatever comes, whatever we do,
I'm falling, falling, falling for you.
Bridge
Maybe it's the way you say my name,
Maybe it's the way you never play a game.
Maybe it's your laugh, your eyes, your smile,
Maybe I'd walk with you for miles and miles.
Maybe it's nothing I can explain,
Maybe it's sunshine after rain.
Maybe I don't need to know what's true,
I only know I'm falling for you.
Final Chorus
I'm falling, falling, falling for you,
Like every dream I ever knew.
I'm hoping, hoping, hoping it's true,
That someday you'll be falling too.
If love's a song, then sing it loud,
Let our melody rise above the crowd.
Whatever comes, whatever we do,
I'll keep on falling,
Falling for you.
Outro
Falling for you,
Falling right through,
Every little dream
Leads me back to you.
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Helloo & a late welcome to YWS!!
Ngl I tried creating a melody to sing this the very first time I read through it and it flowed really nice! I'm not specifically experienced with music and definitely not with writing it, but I'm going to try my best in this short review : )
Lovedddd <3:
- The rhyming and how it didn't mess with but instead enhanced the meaning! It's clear you spent some good time writing this!
- I kinda already mentioned this, but your song is so catchy and I imagine it could be sung at a variety of different keys/pitches [hopefully you know what I mean, idk which word singers/composers usually use] and still sound beautiful!
- It's also really nice how you labeled the different portions of the lyrics, and the fact that you have all of these components I think further emphasizes that you really put some hard work into writing this!
- The imagery and figurative parts are also very meaningful and creative! I loved how you personified future to have wings, and the part about skies turning "brighter blue"! The repetition of certain words in the chorus also makes this such a good ol' song if you know what I mean; like that element really helps it artistically in my opinion.
Honestly, I don't have any tips as I'm not much of a songwriter but thanks for sharing your talent & God bless! keep writinggggg! Also love your username <3
Thank you so much! It's nice to know another Cristian on this! I love to label my sections (I'm not very familiar with official words either 🤣) so that when I'm playing my guitar to it, I know when to get louder and softer!
I think when I read this I feel lost on the nature of the relationship between the person singing their love and the object of their affection. I am not sure if they are having a crush and the other person is not aware of the love, or is not feeling the same way--or perhaps they are together but the other person is not feeling the same level of love. That is what makes it hard for me to fully engage in the lyrics. It is not that they are not good because it is a beautiful song with beautiful lines, but make it more known the nature of the actual relationship. I hope that helps a lot!
It certainly does! Thank you very much for your feedback!
great song! loved how everything rhymed which gave it a very playful sound to me. its really catchy and i will probably be singing it in the back of my head for a few days 😅i would like to hear it in a recording though... (idk if u can do that) all in all its a great song ☺️
Thank you!