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thanks for the review!

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wow i have to say-- this isn't that dramatic, nor humorous, but it has a certain glow to it i love how you reviewed yws. this is just awesome.

thank you for the review!

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thanks for the review!

LOOOL yes

#socialweek my god the aesthetics of this poem was wonderful. the way you carefully led the reader through a broken-hearted poet's experience of rules and creativity was breathtaking. i enjoyed ...

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thank you so much for this review! But what does your third line mean? It doesn't make sense to me that an absence of borders would cause cause tears to ...

thank you for the review!

I'm honored that you can compare my work with Shel Silverstein! Haha yeah this poem was more of a satire than a humorous poem, but it could be interpreted as ...

o-o am i talking too much lol sorry this should be your story :) good luck, though!

yup it's a little bit of dramatic irony because it seems pretty general until the main character dies and the reader sees the real meaning AND THEN you insert something ...

@frogforest i actually have a suggestion for foreshadowing the beginning instead of This is the story of how I found what it means, to me, to be happy. But it ...