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Oops my bad for thinking the main character was a he. Can't wait for the next chapter to be released. If you have the time, could you check out: Thanks!

Will do, will do. Feel free to check out the sci-fi book I'm writing. I would love some feedback from a fellow Star Wars fan.

Thanks for the review. Will get to those corrections ASAP.

Thank you for the review, you are a great help. If you have the time, could you please review the second part of this chapter?

Thanks for the advice @Keepwriting. If you have the time, could you please review: Thanks in advance!

Thanks for the review keepwriting, would you be able to review chapter two for me? If you are able, here's the link to it. Thanks again for the review!

Thank you so much for your feedback infiniterectangle, it is much appreciated. Don't worry about it, you're not annoying me by pointing out my grammar mistakes. In fact, I welcome ...

Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated. I will get on to the corrections as soon as possible. I've changed the part where Marthan says "Nope". I agree with you, it ...

Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated. I will get on to the corrections as soon as possible. P.S. To answer your question on Master Lianna Sunrunner, Marthan does not know ...

haha no problem, no problem. To answer your earlier your question, I might want to publish this in the future. When I eventually finish it.

Thanks for the review ! Haha I actually meant to ask you to review Chapter 10 Part 2. Looks like I screwed up the link. Silly me ! Thanks for ...

Thanks for the review. Wasn't expecting it to come out this fast. I'll get to fixing those problems right away. Thanks again!

Of course. More than happy to review the next draft.

Thanks for offering to help searching the story for HP parallels. It would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks for the review Wolfie. I really appreciate it. Sorry for not answering your question the last time. I know I have a problem in terms of the originality department. ...