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Thanks so much! I'm so glad you took the time to review!

Thanks so much, I made the changes! And, yep, nerds rule!

Thanks so much, I made the changes! And, yep, nerds rule!

Thank you so much! Well, I'm definitely NOT a know-it-all! Infact (unfortunately) I might be the complete contrary! I mentioned the 'don't call me modest' bit to express that this ...

You're welcome...but honestly! Amazing poetry!

Thanks!

Thanks for reviewing! I had actually repeated the 'but' intentionally, since i expected there to an extra line in the middle...however it didn't come out like that! It sounds really ...

This poem is enthralling... It just flowed through my mind in amazing grace, and I held my breath till the very end, anticipating what would come next... Your descriptions were ...

Thank you!

I think this piece is beautiful. It's so mesmorising and so filled with emotion. I loved the part where you put the "how dare you come back" and "you mean ...

Thanks a lot! I'll definitely work on the sync, and you won't believe this, but I wrote this poem when I was in the Divergent fever! (If you've read the ...

Thank you so much! Glad you took the time to read my poem and I'll work on the 'sync between the feeling and description' Thanks again!

Jeez! Your sister has real talent in expressing through words. I was actually imagining myself telling my teacher about these special doors found in Berlin, the capital of Las Vegas ...