xv0nillaWriterx

sorry, i thought it was going to post ot forum

no problem

I love your poem it have a good flow. I like when you describe the character's actions. And in the end i read it two times and it feels sad. ...

It is really helpful and thx for your review and i will make sure to fix the first paragraph :>

okay thx now i got it

like how the character feels about the dream, is it creepy, sad, mad?

the messy thing part when i write it it is neat but when i post it it is messy

This is not a review I just feel bad for Paris and Paris is a beautiful place where people visit a lot. Why do people attack Paris? And war? No ...

Sorry i got mixed up from a prologue and a epilogue, and thx for you review. And i will fix that

No you think to sorry me, i am neither ( Apple being good or not ) I don't really care about apple and i don't even have any apple electronic ...

Hi, HolographicLadybug, I'm xv0nillaWriterx and I am here to review your poem. First things first, I love the way you seperate them into stanzas and rhyming for almost every sentence. ...

thank you Eros for your review and i will keep writing.

Thank You for your review and i'll make sure i will include all the things you say inside that chapter and my other chapters, Thx and one thing is that ...

Thank You for your review and i'll make sure i will include all the things you say inside that chapter and my other chapters, Thx and one thing is that ...

Thank You for your review and i'll make sure i will include all the things you say inside that chapter and my other chapters, Thx and one thing is that ...