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Hi there. This is well-written. I liked this very much. But I think I want to do some changes in these lines... The feeling is so great Has everything I ...

Looks like we're in the same situation and these lines are likely similar to the situations. :) praying for the courage to speak out to you but hiding away and ...

Hi there. I really like this a lot. It's just that you will need to put punctuation in your poem. It will be just greater if it has periods in ...

This is just great! So I have a thought that this is about the pollution because of these lines. For the landscape lies dead, And the trees and rocks and ...

I like the simplicity in your poem. Is this a suicidal poem? hehe. Cause I can't seem really to get it the first time I read it. This stanza is ...

Hey there. A crow is really a good metaphor for a loner (hehe). And I thought that this is well-written and I didn't really find any error in your poem. ...

I can't really find any weakness in all 3 parts of your poem. You're really a good writer! :) So keep writing. I'm looking forward for some works from you. ...

Hi there. I could relate to this at some point because I had actually written a poem like this and it was regarding of my fear of the dark. I ...

Hello there! I liked this quite a lot. I believe that there are many teenagers out there are feeling this too and thus,this is a good way of expressing your ...

Hi there. This is a really good poem,and you yourself is a good writer too. :) Due to the fact that you want some help with the stanzas (hehe), I ...

Amazing poem! You are such a good writer. I wish I could be able to write this long, cause everytime I tried,it is out of place and such. Yours are ...

Hello there! I found that your poem is very sweet. Well I'm not really good at giving tips,so I will just compliment you with your high vocabulary. The words "sojourn" ...

I like the meaning of your poem. Really,I could relate to this at some points cause I honestly,still sleeping with the lights on because I am too afraid of the ...

Wow. This is a very complex lyrics,in a good kind of way. I think it's good to express our feeling through long lyrics like this cause those strong emotions just ...

Wow. This is so impressive! I liked it a lot. :D I like how this is so well-written and the words are nicely chosen. And I like the repetition lines ...