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Ok. First off I think this poems is strongly suggesting none of us need to do drugs. It seems like you are mostly directing this to the use of heroine, ...

This is a great piece of poetry Black Fox :) One thing I might say is though that you used black to describe his/her wings. Black doesn't always represent evil. ...

Aww , so many great poems are on this site!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This one is really one of my favorites. Why? I am not really sure truth be told. :( It is ...

I like this poem alot ! I am a little confused what it is about though . I want to say it is about how us humans are cruel. How ...

This is a very amazing , awesome , great , good , unique , and interesting poem:) :) I like the way you used the fact us stupid people spend ...

Well this is no doubt a great poem. The only thing I don't like about it is the way you structured it. Some stanzas have 4 lines some have 2 ...

Well, speakerskat , this is a great piece of work. I like how a lot of people can probably connect with the words you are speaking . We live in ...

This is the kind of poetry I absolutely love! It is dark , scary , sad , and negative . Emotion means quite a bit in poetry ( if not ...