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Hi, Noelle. I don't know what made me click and read a chapter mid-way into a story but I'm glad I did. This is awesome! Like, really good storytelling. The ...

Hey mari, the title really brought me into this piece. I don't usually review stuff that has comments already, but I had a good feeling about this. And I was ...

So this is pretty cool :) I love how it has pirates; you don't get many pirate stories. The prologue was nice and short and grabs our attention. You've got ...

Huh, that was a very interesting end to the chapter! I really liked it. Though I'm still not sure what transporting means or why Glore can do it. Still, it's ...

Finally I'm here, lol. I'm still loving the idea of being inside a dragon. Your descriptions are getting better and I love how you incorporate the organs. Like saying how ...

Hi! And welcome to YWS :D I like how you started the story off with the quote, or rather, your thesaurus notes. It fit the chapter very well! Great idea ...

Hi! I haven't read chapter 1, but hopefully my comments can still be useful :) This seems like a good story so far! I'm wondering where you're planning on going ...

Hi! I hope I can help you a bit. :) My first impression was that you're a great writer! You do a good job setting the scene and telling us ...

Hi! Sorry for such a late review! I had a lot of fun reading this. Really, the concept and location were very unique. It almost felt like an idea that ...

Hey :) You've got tons of reviews already, so I'll make this short and sweet. I liked it! You're a quality writer, for sure. I've liked all your stories. I ...

Intense beginning! I like it. Small nitpick: Legs almost buckling I stagger forward a few steps to gain balance. Swallowing back my unease I reach for the doorknob. For lines ...

Hi! I'm doing this review pretty quickly, so I'll just get right down to my points! :) The first paragraph was a little confusing to me because of the tenses. ...

I really love this poem. I've never been much of a fan of poetry, because most of the time it seems like there are too many flowery words that get ...

Hi again! Thanks for the link to this :) I'll second what manisha said about how can try to show more things instead of telling. You've got a great story ...

Another poem, yay! :) I like how much variety you have in your writing :) The first poem I read was romantic, the second kind of sentimental, and the third ...