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Hey :) I thought I might as well stop by for chap 1 Calypso Baros screamed, the sound muffled through the padded white walls of her cell. This was the ...

Change only happens gradually But ours is happening rapidly Things aren't the way they used to be We've changed, you and me I don't think it was for the best ...

This one is very short compared to your other poems :) It’s not a bad thing, it just means there is less to critique! So I hope I can still ...

Deep down inside they have not a heart Their eyes pierce at me like frozen darts ‘at me’ isn’t describing this suitably. What was it piercing exactly? Your heart, your ...

If I had nine hearts Would it push me to love? Would it make me bear the gifts He sends me from above? For some reason I don’t really like ...

Back again for part 2 :) “You too, Elizabeth.” I heard him whisper again before I was out of earshot. I felt that this was pretty cliché. It seems like ...

Hey there :) I didn't read your first part, but here I am. Calypso stared blankly out to sea. The helicopter had dropped her off around an hour before, and ...

Hey there :) "Abduco!" the boy called, imitating what the man three feet away from him had done; nothing happened. The dark figure laughed humorlessly. "Of course not. comma " ...

Hiya :) The pale, no comma yellow rays of the moon illuminated my skin as I sat upon the brick wall near the lake of silver and blue. I cannot ...

Hi there :) No reviews yet? I'll help you out. I picked my self up from the ground. I finished the bread loaf the Orphanage had given me, their sick ...

I looked at my small body in the mirror. The blue in the short, strapless dress brought out the blue specks in my dark grey eyes. My long, dark brown ...

ERRAN: A shot rang out across the ruins of what once was a miraculous city full of life. Now, as more shots echoed through the black, dead night, New York ...

So even though chapter 1 wasn't my cup of tea, I thought I'd give this novel a second chance and review part 2! :) Chapter 2 Switching dorms As I ...

Walking to Technology seemed longer today, period was it because I was thinking of him? His liquid purple and blue eyes, his shaggy fair hair, just thinking of him gave ...

Oh wow, this is such a late reply sorry! I had your review saved on my laptop all this time I just forgot about it and now you've changed so ...