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Chapter one: The Harvest Moon. Dimwalden Forest, Northern Caraca, Netheron: A late autumn breeze wafted through the trees, loosing clouds of orange, yellow, and brown leaves from their holds, and ...

sorry about the lateness of the review, and how choppy and unreadable it is... i'm trying to copy and paste it from my computer and it's coming out all weird. ...

Hey there Twit ^_^ A few things to get things kick-started: "I feel it lurch up inside like too many Dr Peppers on an empty stomach," I really like this ...

Back again! This looks like it's the last chapter up for now :) As you can already tell, I pretty much start with the comments right away as I start ...

Hm, honestly I'm a bit confused now. I'll tell you why. I had thought that only the italicized parts were the flashback, but is this whole scene a flashback? Because ...

Alright, I'll run right into the reviewing part :) "He'd forgotten when he'd been hung up here, like a piece of meat, to await the pleasure of 'the General' who ...

Hey ^_^ I feel like reviewing today so I'm just going to run through as much as I can of this and give my thoughts! In your second line, personally ...

Hey Obscuro! I'm not sure exactly what genre or style this song is supposed to be sung in, but I'll try to review it all the same x) Alright, so ...

Hey there! I really liked this piece, your writing style is pretty cool. You did a great job with description and I felt myself getting into the scene, feeling dreary ...

Hey babymagic! I realize this was posted back in October, but maybe you're still looking for advice? :) Hope I can help! I think the description you have here is ...

Hey David! Hopefully I can give a bit of advice here! Interesting piece you have :) I personally like to read tough questions like this, it definitely gets me thinking! ...

Hey there! I hope some of my comments can be a little helpful! :) Alright, this was pretty good! I liked it. I can personally relate, I am also 18 ...

Hey again Nike ^_^ This felt a lot like the other piece of yours that I reviewed, kind of like a blog post but not exactly. I had a bit ...

Hey Nike! This felt kinda like a blog post to me, not that that's a bad thing. I sort of understand what you are saying with this, but there's not ...

Hey Black! I haven't read any of your story before, so I'll just be jumping in here quickly to give you what advice I can ^_^ "After getting out of ...