xMidnightWriterx

Hey, I'm Midnight and I will be reviewing your work today. Lol =] Okay, I'm going to be all neat about this and split it up into three catagories: THE ...

Hey, I can definitely see why you got an A. This is a really good piece of work and you've done a great job of going against gender sterotypes. Seeing ...

Heya, this is a great idea that you've got going. I can see mystery and adventure along the horizon =] - 'Her closet friends, Zoe had bought it for her' ...

Well, I have to say that I think your title for this fits very well! Meredith seems thoroughly insane. Okay, the first part was going really smoothly. I definitly didn't ...

Wow, this is quite an intense prologue and a very well written one too! In my own personal opinion, prologues should give hints to the reader about what the book ...

Well, this is difinitely an interesting story so far and I'm wondering where it will go from here. There is one thing that I have to point out though; have ...

Hey, cm57105, this was a really good piece of literature! It was very captivating and makes me really intrigued as to what happens next. As with all pieces of writing, ...

Heya midnightsky =] Love your username, by the way! This is very good piece of descriptive writing and I love how you create so much emotion. I really feel for ...

Hello Lyricalias! This is an amazing piece of work and, to be completely honest, I can find little wrong with it. I love the characters you have created so far ...

Hello, :) This is really good, i love the whole idea that you've got going on and i think it will make for a really interesting story! I love your ...

Hello! This is a very nice prologue and I should know because I'm forever writing them! You've chosen to write this in first person, which is nice becasue it is ...

Wow, this gets more interesting everytime I read another chapter! You have to go until the end with this one!! :D I'm sorry that you've had writers block, I hate ...

Hello, This is really good. Although you said it was a short story and you've placed it in the novels section. Also I've learnt that when posting a whole novel ...

Hello, I'm sorry to say that I haven't read any of your previous posts - nice preidiction there :) - but from just reading this I must say that I ...

Hello, I promised I'd review and here I am!! :D The reviewers before me have already picked out all the nit picks so I'll just say the things I like ...