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I love this poem, it i so sweet and incredibly true - why wont people see what we have done to the earth? i thought it flowed perfectly, like a ...

Im really offended that you said "dont read if you have depression" yea the poem was good but that is so insulting, my mother had serios depression and you saying ...

I loved it! very emotional, very sad, i love the last part where you say her pale eyes droop the word scarlot is also good, instead of just saying blood ...

Aww this was so sweet! i have a guines pig and you described the little furry things wonderfully :D i love the lingering smells bit lol, and nibbled pages - ...

I loved it! I couldn't stop reading, normally it takes so much determination to finish reading something on YWS but i was immediately hooked, ive never really read any austin ...

Wow! i cant wait to see what happens... i think you needed to add some commas though cus if i tried to read it out load i would probably pass ...

I liked it, it so reminded me of when i was ten and did all those things :D playing outside until it was dark was a good one! im still ...

Beautiful, it was so tender and sweet, and i felt the pain of the person who was writing the letter. it was also such a shock with the thing with ...

wow, i really liked it! It was short, sweet and simple, just how i like them :D but i think if you sent this to a girl in an email ...

The worst book i have probably ever read was The Fire Within. I almost cried. It was so bad. I saw it in the book shop and was like "awesome ...

Wow loved it! i am such a big fan of the Twilight books, and this goes perfectly with it. Im always slightly wary of reviewing lyrics as i cant hear ...

OMG that was amazing! It was so intense, i was breathless! i really thout "Yes, there gonna get together!" but then that gunshot and boom, woa it was so good. ...

I liked it, i think i liked it more than your other poem but i wasnt too sure about the first paragraph... the brackets just didnt seem to fit, and ...

First three lines here. the first line is good, though the word "bright" sort of gives the impression of daylight, not night. but it also describes the stars and moon ...

OMG that was so beautiful... so heartbreakingly romantic lol. i loved it, it was so confusing i so want to know what is going to happen next, and why there ...