Published September 27, 2008
Thought you say that it’s too dangerous,
Believe me, I know.
I can see it in your Topaz eyes,
I can feel it in my soul
Everyday as dawns the
Twilight, Twilight
Though we may never be free in the
Twilight, Twilight,
But you see, I know, you are stronger than you think.
And even if you aren’t, well,
I showed up here, didn’t I?
Which means that I would rather die
Than be without you here in the
Twilight, Twilight
Though we may never be free in the
Twilight, Twilight,
Every day must end in
Twilight, Twilight
Brings all thing to an end
Though I know it cannot be,
Nothing, no nothing,
Can take you away from me,
Not even the
Twilight, Twilight
Though we may never be free in the
Twilight, Twilight,
Every day must end in
Twilight, Twilight
Brings all thing to an end
I love you still, in the Twilight for all to see.
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no offense but this does not sound like a song- it's more of a poem for twilight
there is basically no lyrics at all in this, it's a poem
Very Nice, I think this would actually go with Twilight, great work, keep writing.
it sounds cool so far, but i can't tell of course until i hear it. I'd be really intrigued to hear this song actually.
everyone should check out a song called Undone, by Kat Tingey, its written about Stephenie Meyers characters too, it great. You can find it on myspace.
Wow loved it! i am such a big fan of the Twilight books, and this goes perfectly with it. Im always slightly wary of reviewing lyrics as i cant hear the song so it just sounds like a poem but i really liked this, i could imagen to kind of song that could go with it