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Re: Untitled Chapters 3 and 4
Hey Pen =] I got all smiley when I saw that you'd posted these parts. I loved the first two chapters and didn't hesitate to read these two chapters too, ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Pretty Little China Doll
Hey Meg =] Wow. I wish could make up a story as good as this without knowing where the plot is heading! I'm really creeped out by this - not ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: 'Electric Dreamer': Chapter Three: Maddie
Hey Lisa =] I'm sorry that I haven't gotten around to reviewing this for you sooner - I've been so tired (my fault for going out clubbing all the time) ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Dreams of Giants -- Chapter 4, Part 1
Hey Yoda =] So... I really have nothing bad to say about your writing. You make it vary hard for me to give you a proper review :roll: I couldn't ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Fading Rainbow (ch 1)
Hey =] I'm Dudette and I'm going to take a look at this for ya' Just a quick note before I start though. People tend to be put of reading ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: A Touch of Death (Part 2 of 3)
Hey Lily =] I'm back for part two! So... who would move the soul - I'd add 'then' after 'would' for she was not the only one, Death Bringers. - ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: A Touch of Death (Part 1 of 3)
Hey Lily =] I was searching through for something to review and the title of your story caught my eye :) I'm going to take a look at this for ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Dreams of Giants -- Chapter 3, Part 2
Hey Yoda =] Thanks for letting me know that this was up :) So. I don't think that I can give you a proper grammatical review, 'cause everything that I ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Being Remembered ch. 1
Hey Alyssh =] Welcome to YWS! I'm Dudette and I'm going to try and review this for ya' Just a quick note before I begin though. We have a 2:1 ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset [2.2]
Hey Colleen =] I'm glad that you're back to writing this story :) I shall try and review it for ya' So... I opened cabinets violently looking for gauze wrap ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Nightly Terrors
Hey =] I saw that you'd posted something and didn't hesitate to take a closer look :) It was so nice to read something of yours after you've given such ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Accidentaly Famous Chapter 2 (part one)
Hey Erica =] Thanks for the PM! I'm glad that you're continuing with this story :) So, I'll try to review this for ya' which included the rest of the ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Diary of a teenage disaster 5
Hey Meg =] Thanks for the PM! The problem is that it looks like a lawnmower with a beak. - I lol'd at this. Her drawing abilities appear to match ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: 'Electric Dreamer': Chapter Two: Scarlett
Hey Lisa =] Thanks for the PM! Sorry it's taken me so long but I've had a week long break from YWS in an attempt to edit my second story ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Metamorphosis-Chapter 1.2
Hey Angel =] Thanks for the PM! Sorry I'm a bit late, but I've had a weak off of YWS to try and edit my story. So, this story still ...
May 9, 2009