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Re: I forgot to tell you something...
Spark! You were totally right. That was fluff at it's best. The last line had me aww-ing and smiling like a loon :P This doesn't really warrant a proper review ...
Apr 23, 2012 -
Re: The importance of becoming a Narcissist
Hey Emm! I'm back again! So I liked that you switched up the point of view. It gives the reader a chance to get to know Leo a little better ...
Apr 21, 2012 -
Re: The Importance of Becoming a Narcissist (chapter one)
Hey there, Emm! Welcome to YWS! I hope you have an awesome time here and find it a great way to make friends and share your work at the same ...
Apr 20, 2012 -
Re: The Wolf and the Brush (A fairytale)
Hey there, InTheTrees! I'm a fan of fairytales, especially since the TV series Grimm reminded me of a few I'd forgotten, so I knew I had to read this to ...
Apr 12, 2012 -
Re: Can I slice the chicken this time?(WARNING: This story is not nice, it is sick and disturbing)
Hey there! So you reviewed my work, so it only seems right that I return the favour :) I don't have much time for a proper review, so I'll just ...
Apr 10, 2012 -
Re: Like A Butterfly Spring--- Chap. 1
Hey there, ShootingStars! This is very well written for a twelve year old. I couldn't write anything near as detailed and flowing as this when I was your age. I'm ...
Apr 10, 2012 -
Re: A Fresh Start
Hey there, iEuphoria! Welcome to YWS! Now, this to me doesn't come across as a short story. Firstly because it's too short, and secondly, because not much happens. There's no ...
Apr 10, 2012 -
Re: Never Good Enough
Hey Anchor! Long time no speak. I haven't got time for a full on review, so I'll just give you my overall thoughts. Firstly, this topic is so now, it's ...
Apr 5, 2012 -
Re: No Haven of Mine (Stop and Stare segment)
Smurf! It's so good to read some of Stop and Stare again. And this is a new addition to the story, right? You can tell their clueless and their clueless ...
Apr 3, 2012 -
Re: Guilt
Hey there Frankie! Welcome to YWS! I hope you have an awesome time here :) Now, I've been away for a while so my reviewing might not be up to ...
Apr 3, 2012 -
Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 6.
Hey DG! I saw you'd posted this when I popped by YWS a couple of weeks ago but I didn't have time to review so I'm gonna give it a ...
Apr 1, 2012 -
Re: They've Got No Idea
Hey there :) I haven't really read anything on here in a while, but this caught my eye and after a little read I realised how much I miss the ...
Feb 6, 2012 -
Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 5.
Hey DG! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to reviewing this, but I'm here now. Finally. This was so sweet. I loved how forward Allen was with Leah ...
Feb 5, 2012 -
Re: Chase - Part 1 / Chapter One: Zephyr
Hey again! The way you write is great. There's just enough description for me to picture what's going on, without flowery prose distracting me. The dialogue is realistic, and I ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Chase - Prologue
Hey there Gen! I'm not really one for prologues but the title caught my eye, so I came for a gander :) First off, your opening line is great. At ...
Dec 9, 2011