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I really liked it. It was nice all the way through - really touching. I like the description and you can really relate with the character :D

It was good...can't think of any improvements. It was lovely to read and well written

really sweet and touching. nice poem - flowed well

I agree it could have been shorter...but nice all the same

Hey i changed it.

hey cool thanks. ill keep that in mind.

Well written.

interesting and eerie. i like it. you can imagine everything.

I dont completely get it but a nice read all the same. :D

LOVE IT. You wrote all that about an...APPLE. wow. i loved it. it was weird - completely bonkers - but that, i think, is a good thing. Great description and ...

Yeah - I do agree with the jumping around.But i did like it and i can sort of relate with it.

I agree with the above - though apart from some reperats it was very good

Oh...yeah. Thank!

Intersesting. Really nice. How do you write like that?! i enjoyed it.

different. nice to read. love it.