wunmi

Tree’s revenge. I feel as if the story plot is so cliché but there is something there and I think if this story was longer then it would be better. ...

I really like this poem it really good and insightful. What I love the most about it is the imagery that you used… “Grinding them underfoot; Casting others in your ...

I really like this story, it was the title that drew me in, it seemed like a name to me but the name was unusual enough to set my curiosity ...

Is the road a methopher ? It feels like one. It’s not original but it’s still a good one and it really highlight what your poem is saying. The poem ...

The start of the piece reminds me of “The Perks of being a Wallflower”. I think the letter style gives the piece a sense of mystery; this was one of ...

This poem speaks some truth so I think a lot of people can relate to it. There is a lot of truth in the first lines "In those moments where ...

okay a real review. Like I said before this poem is amazing, the emotion behind it is so real and heartfelt. The poem is long but this adds to its ...

I liked it. It sounds like it could be interesting, very interesting. I like the girls attitude although i don't think that her stereotypical room suits this attitude. I don't ...

I don't know how I feel about this poem. I like that it short and is to the point, it helps get the message across clear than if it as ...

Mistake o f instead of of First paragraph is really good. I love its tone, the words like serenity ,traversed ,and poignant really helped make the paragraph good The other ...

The story is really good . I liked the concept you used of everything not being what people think it is, Hence dragons being princesses. I like the away you ...

I really like this. It's short enough that you don't get tired of reading it, but long enough to give your readers time to get a picture of the world ...

Firstly, I think there may be an error in the first sentence "Do you know how does it feel to wake up every morning" It doesn't really make sense to ...

Someone commented that you abrupt changed from nature to the human world didn't seem to tie well together but I think your transition from plant, to animal, to human is ...

I think if you look at this piece in a philosophic way it does tell alot about our society today. in society today we call thing what they not, usually ...