writingmouse_13

Thanks for the PM! :D I didn't see anything that needed correcting. I really like the story, I'm so curious about what will happen! Can't wait for the rest!

Ooh! I like it, but you had alot of dashes in the first couple of paragraphs and the part where she is saying "She didn’t know if this was a ...

..... That was really creepy... But totally awesome! My skin was crawling! Nuf said! It was great! Who cares about grammer when the story is awesome! Sorry, I'm being too ...

Thanks for the PM, I didn't think this part was slow paced at all! Any who down to buisness. "It felt like she had been frozen for days, the only ...

Well as usual, someone has beaten me to the chase. I cannot see anything else to correct that hasn't been already. I like the style that you write with, but ...

It's so sad but I really love it, it's beautiful and it really paints a picture in my head of the person who is narrating the song. I get the ...

I liked it alot, at first, with the familiar names and tenancies from the Twilight books, I thought it might be another fanfic, but as I read on, I've got ...

I liked it, you've already been corrected on other things so I'll just praise it. I thought it gave a very insightful view into the traditions and views of Wicca. ...

Amazing, while I was reading, I couldn't tear my eyes from the page! It's very good, you've got all the right stuff, details, and you really pulled me into the ...

I liked it, not many people know the scientific word for werewolf. Pandapez has already corrected your spelling errors, so I'll just tell you what I think it needs. Yes, ...

Yes, I agree with Blink, and people have told me this to. Your story needs to take time to develop, maybe describe the characters more and give more details, or ...