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I can feel a lot of meaning and feelings behind this poem. I loved how you repeated U CAN... BE GRATEFUL! after each stanza. I liked it! Great job! ...But ...

This poem is one hundred percent pure and beautiful! I wish I was the one who wrote it. :) What I love most about it is each of the lines ...

Did you just type this up randomly? :) The last line of the haiku seemed kind of random to me. I would suggest writing a more lengthy poem rather than ...

Hey there Litehawk! I loved your poem. The rhyming was nice and reasonable, unlike some others with nonsense lines forced to rhyme. As others already mentioned, just use plain black ...

Hey Soleil! That's a really awesome poem you wrote there. I'll start off with the things I really loved about it. singing, swaying in the wind, reaching up to the ...

Nice poem! I'm going to list the positives first. I liked how you said: I can dance with the fibbers; Waltzing in a snowflake garden. I also liked how you ...

I really like this poem! You told the readers when you don't feel so great, you look at the moon. But the only thing I'll add to it is description. ...

Good poem! I like how you compared the days how you spent your summer on the last stanza: the late mornings, and funny frights. The short shorts and tank tops. ...

I think your poem is okay. Not too good, or bad. Just in the middle. I think you can make some connections with some specific parts of the poem. For ...

I like that poem about friendship! :D Your writing is nice and they are placed in a good order. Yet, I agree with El Finito. You may want to somehow ...