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Hi! Sorry it took me forever to respond! Oh gosh, you totally understand what I was trying to do with the inversions! Great insight! Hmm, you're right. I'll be changing ...

Hello! Sorry it took me forever to respond! I'm glad you like the roots of it. :) And hmm, interesting idea about the punctuation. I do like the hyphens because ...

No problem! I'm sorry for making such a big deal about the formatting (thank you, glitches!). Turns out it's actually enter then shift. Weird!

Hello! And I'm glad that this makes you happy. :D Oxymorons are favorites of mine, too. I'm glad you see the meanings behind the "it's very old to be very ...

Thank you so much!

Hello! And there are times I have felt like this as well, though I haven't ever smoked or done anything like the poem has said. The character herself is not ...

Hello! And thank you so much! I definitely can understand the emotions of being a teenager, though I haven't done everything in this poem. And I'm glad you like how ...

Thank you! Have done so!

Thank you so much! And yes, I have edited it how Lightsong suggested! Thanks again!

Hello! Anna here, ready to review! First of all, the 3/3 at the beginning makes me think that this is the third poem in a series of three poems. I'm ...

Hi! I'm going to come back after I get a good night's sleep so the review will be the best it can be. See you then! :D

Alright! Once I get on my computer that's my top priority. :D

Thank you so much for all of your fantastic feedback! I will get right on that. I was confused about creating a new line, so I'll certainly use your strategy. ...

Oh, thank you! And those are my favorite lines as well. :)

You're right...I do use "and" quite often. Once I get off my mobile I'll do my best to fix that. Thank you!