writer88

I loved this, carmenbluestar. I absolutely loved this. This definitely describes a life of a geeky/popular girl. I absolutely loved it. This is the best short story ever, and I ...

Hey, Collideascope! Wise here to review quickly! Hmm, let's see. I love how you capitalize your poem perfectly, that's good, but I noticed. "Im" should be "I'm", 'cause of course ...

Hey bestie wisegirl22!!! Writer88 is here to review your work on this fine (LOL I hope you get the joke) Review Day! I really liked this work and I am ...

Hello! I am writer88 here! I disagreed at first because I love dogs, but it was a humorous poem, and I liked it! But, your title does not follow the ...

Heya wisegirl22! Writer88 here to write a review. Last one to earn a review star! Squee!!! Overall, it was an interesting song. Some critiques: Add some more description, vivid vocabulary ...

Hey Iyssiekins! Writer88 here to review for ya'! I really liked your poem, but I will tell ya' the praise later. First, I think you should capitalize the beginning of ...

Hey! Writer88 here to review! It was pretty good! Just a couple critiques. In this phrase,"Tomorrow, my eighth birthday is occurring...," I think the "is" should be a "will be." ...

Amazing! I really liked the idea and the title. It captured me when I saw this. I don't think ducks would eat something like that, though. Is there supposed to ...

Hello! Writer88 writing a review: I liked how your prologue had good imagery and descriptions. I also liked the flashback and suspense at the end. That way, more people will ...