wretchednot

Try agin I suppose

Ohh... Sounds sexy~

Thanks. And I'll take your advice honestly when I was writing I felt like I was rough drafting the whole thing.

Good for you(:

I suppose it is depending on how you see yourself in a good or bad way.

A new way about viewing ones existence or their self.

Well this is a very interesting story you made. All the hardships your going through sound extremely terrible and completely unfortunate. The way you tell about your struggles gives the ...

Oh! And make sure to proof read seems you made a grammar mistake.

My my. Good for you! Stay strong:-D

Whoops! Acccidetally commented.

Thank you for the tips and such. I will continued writing and hopefully improve a bit. I appreciate the review Thanks!

Thanks!

And sorry about the quotation mistake I get confused by those constantly

Thanks! I'll continue writing and hopefully fix any errors Thanks for reviewing.

Thank you and my apologies for it being so short I couldn't decide to make it a chapter or prolog. Thanks for the review and I will continue to write!