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Thank you for getting my comedy!!! I think that the poem sounds more poetic if it is read out loud. And great review for your first day!

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Thank you for this beautiful review and insight! You have revealed new light to me upon my own work!!!!

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This is a beautiful poem. Thank you a lot for sharing it. I love the repetition and manipulation of the tenses for added affect. After reading, wore and buried my ...

Thank you! I did not know about the double spaceing trick! There are 3 lines in each stanza.

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thank you for your feedback! I am still working on having it be more clear, make more sense. Any edits or suggestions are welcome!! Thanks for your time.

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This poem captures our generations tendency to hide itself from all ,including ourselves, beautifully. It is split up nicely in the different lines and is easy to follow. There is ...

This poem is both beautifully written and relatable to most of all teenagers. It simply, yet truly, expresses how growing apart and friendships change during these times.