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Re: tribal colors
This is an amazing and unique piece of writing. The piece it's self had a personality. I particularily liked the last stanza: can you, you, as in you, smell the ...
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Re: Amira
I really enjoyed the suspense leading up to the wife's execution. I noticed though, that it said : And then I fell unconscious upon the body of my husband. not ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: Believe Me, I'm Lying
This made me tear up! It's just so real and so sad. I hope to read more, it's not often you find stories like these that make you emotional. Though ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: Leave the World Behind
I really liked this poem. The description allowed me to get a clear image in my head. It felt like a dream almost. I appreciate the meaning of this writing ...
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Re: Sticks and stones
I really liked the emotion in the words and the overall truthfulness of the silent treatment. I agree that it's worse than words. But I also agree with firepen; I'm ...
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Re: Freak
This piece of writing was very insightful and had an almost poetic feel. I really liked it. But I wonder, what makes he/she a freak? And why is he/she hiding ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: Prologue - Untitled Story
I love the writing style used here. The story was so captivating and unique. I love how the woman stood up for the wolf and defended herself as well. The ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: Enslaved Chapter 1 Scene 2
Your story is coming along very well, but the clif-hangars are killing me here! I hope that you write the next scene soon. I'm dying to read more! My rating: ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: Enslaved. Chapter 1 Scene 1.
I really like your writing style. The beginning of his book leaves a lot of questions. I'm curious as to why Arvad can't remember his own sister's name, and I ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: What one will do for love
Wow, that was so bone chilling and creepy. It was a really great horror story. The only mistake I noticed was that you put "my" when it should have been ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: Butterflies
I liked this song, how real it is; no glamorized lyrics about how you should feel. You just sang it as it was. I hope you continue to write songs, ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: Never Coming Back
This is a great star for a novel. It hooked me straight away with it's almost poetic description. I do have one suggestion; after the words"fell asleep" maybe you could ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: I wonder
I wonder about a lot of things to. And I guess the answer to the most part of your wonders would be:because we're human, and we're not perfect. And if ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: my high school VALEDICTORY speech
That was amazing, your a great motivational speaker. The only bad thing about it was a small spelling mistake; "stuffs" should have been "things". It really inspired me to try ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: The Ghastly Game of Blame
Wow, if I had to review this in one word it would be wow. I really love this poem; it has a very clear image and cryptic meaning. The start ...
May 28, 2012
