wordsandwishes

That was very deep. It made me get all emotional. Your flow and conventions were good. I hope to hear more of your work! My favorite part: Her name was ...

I like how the poem is unique and metaphorical, but has a believable storyline to it. And the emotion in the last stanza was killer! It tied off the poem ...

Your flow is very good and I love your metaphorical meaning and your interesting mood. It's almost like... resignation, not quite acceptance but more of a realization moving towards acceptance. ...

I really appreciate your vivid description. It also allowed a little bit of the main character's personality to shine through. Your layout and flow was flawless, your conventions too. A ...

This was interesting, and by far the longest entry I've ever read. Your unique storyline made it a refreshing piece. I think you may have overdid the accent of the ...

I really like the metaphorical description f waking up from a dream. Your flow was very good and the emotion was a nice touch. I really don't have anything bad ...

Good stuff: Punctuation, layout and storyline. Bad stuff: were was supposed to be we're, the characters haven't really been developed yet. I enjoyed reading this piece and I hope to ...

I really enjoyed this writing piece. The story was very new and refreshing in an era where almost EVERYONE writes about vampire and werewolves. I hope to read more. Overall ...

That was beautiful. I lived the ending: 09/26/09, God gained an angel. It ende it perfectly. The only problems I noticed was that the flow wavered slightly, but that's fine. ...

I like the voice in this, and that it's a true story! It takes guts to write about your love life. The reality of it was nice. The only part ...

It was a very interesting poem. I like how visual it was. And your conventions were good too. However, there were some minor problems. It's flow was very bumpy and ...

That song was very creative, I like the emotion in the lyrics. Just try not to be so repetitive about how you're the right girl and she's not. And I ...

That was a really good read. I noticed a couple typos and that you didn't your "s in the right spots. But other than all that nit picky stuff, it ...

I love you description at the beginning, I can just hear the aw in his voice. Your vocabulary word choice was excellent. As far as word choice goes; you did ...

I love this song! I'm a fan of rock music personally. It had a good beat and a good story. I loved it! I liked the 3rd and 2nd last ...