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Sure :D can you send me a pm when you do Chapter 2 please? Much apreciated :D

Wow! I have no critism for this, it made me want to cry though! You are amazing at writing! Could you please send me the links to some more of ...

Hey reason, Thanks for the review first of all and have made some slight adjustments as suggested:P I'm going to keep the "tough, but a soft fabric" as I like ...

Go ahead hun, seems like you've got people hooked, and you've definately got me hooked, so just go with the flow and write! ~Wolfy

Yes I do see your point, but the sex does prove a relevance later on. I'm currently writing the marriage chapter between Sre and Roscrow. I don't view it as ...

Ahaha thanks - it kinda goes into her history with her employer in the rest of the chapters I need to post :D I don't know if I will finish ...

N'aww they probably wouldn't suck. :) Yeshh I know I'm terribly crappy at spelling, and ICT. :D I don't like the brother either, he's kinda modelled on me ex-boyfriend because ...

Thank you :) I think it was meant to be from Peregrine's point of view but I'm not entirely sure either. I am so bad at grammar so I'm not ...

Tehe thanks :D No I have no idea who the rebels are, everyone is asking- I really should come up with an answer. :) - K x

:D Tehe Tehe Tehe! Glad you liked it. x

I have no idea who the rebels are. :D I guess it's just nonsense. ;) Thanks Guys :)

Hi Wow! You're really talented, this is amazing. You made me feel like I was there. I love you description of the lake. Keep Writing. Keri :)

Hey It's a really good first chapter. My only problem is that it's a bit fast paced. Everything doesn't need to happen now, you can save some of your secrets ...

Yeshh! Woop! I really like it because you expect guys to be so unemotional about this kind of stuff, but you're not, but hey I already knew that. ;) ly ...