Those dragons cracked me up! I haven’t read previous chapters so some of my comments may be invalid. I was a bit lost with characters, but that's to be expected. I appreciated the story, mate. Honestly, it was light on detail -didn't overwhelm me, but it adequately got to the point.

Spring moved on into a mild summer. Sre doned the new cowl she had made.

Sre donned. I suggest that spring turned into a mild summer. My delicate ears aren’t digging “moved on” since it’s a cycle. The fact you describe the cloth as “tough, but a soft fabric” makes little to no sense since they’re both contradictory terms. It’s one or the other. If you want to describe how it’s a blend of both characteristics then I suggest being a bit more descriptive. Similar how leather is taut, but has a give to it –flexible to a certain extent and protects from the weather.

His ebon horns

I do believe you meant to say ebony rather than ebon, but I may be wrong here.

She was still awfully nervous considering she'd never had anyone outright flirt with her before.

They’re flirting? He said he liked her hood. Did I miss something just now? I understand later on how she may get the impression what with the bread and that charming grin, but otherwise. I feel she jumped the gun on that one. Unless there was some eye work involved and I was not made aware of this.

I wondered if the protagonist masturbating was necessary for the story. I’m not going to deny the fact I enjoyed it, haha –but seriously speaking. I didn’t get much out of it besides the fact she has a collar that has something to do with slavery.

I have to admit, these nosy dragons are growing on me. The fact they both judge their owners amuses me beyond belief. My only advice is to work on some awkward phrases, here and there -cut down on words when possible and play with sentence structure some more. Hope to see more!