wolfgirl13

Hi Firstly, this is a great piece of writing. I'm going to be nit picky, but because i just love this and feel the need to. So there are a ...

Hey, this is great, seeing as others have pointed out the spelling mistakes, then I won't. But you really have a talent for writing. Keep it up! ~Wolfy

Hey :) First I love your writing style, it's sophisticated and fluent. And you have a great range in vocabulary. You could do some little tweaks on the structure but ...

Hey, you have a great writing style. But I couldn't get into your story for it is too much like Percy Jackson and the Lightning thief. It follows that plotline ...

Hey :) I really do love this, and there really is nothing to nitpick except maybe... I guess I 'd better decide pretty soon because at the moment I’m wasting ...

Hey :) Your overall writing style is fluet and I love the language you have used. There isn't much to nitpick but I will anyway. ;) This type of insanity ...

Hi, I love the overall briefness of the introduction, it really sets the scene. Nitpicking really isn't my thing but I do have one small quarrel, some of your 'I's ...

I'm athesist and don't believe in God, but I love the way you have written it and it's very powerful. You have an amazing writing style and very good grammar. ...

I love you for writing about werewolves. :D I really love your style of writingg!!!! More of things like this pleaseeee :D -Wolfie

So hi I read this and I though wow. But I have one main problem. I hate the use of the word suddenly. I just can't stand that word. You ...

I really love your style of writing but as it's written it feels too jumbles. I think it would be better read if it were to be in a column. ...