woeth

In general, I quite enjoy your work; it's usually deep, compelling and raw. However, your grammar is always letting you down. It truly takes from the poem. Grammar is something ...

jpwriter wow thank you so much for your kind words. I truly appreciate the support x

I'm slightly confused. "extremely personal, I don't think so." This poem is about my mothers suicide and our broken relationship how dare you say that my work is not personal. ...

Thanks again for another review. I actually made a few grammatical errors most of which I think I've fixed. Posting my work at 5 in the morning probably wasn't the ...

Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the review I'll take what you said on board but as you said punctuation is a writer's choice. I write how I hear it in my head.

hey Lizzy I appreciate you taking the time to review my little poem! To be honest with you I havent seen a more corherent review as yours. All the reviews ...

No need to apologise, just a simple misunderstanding. I appreciate all aspects of reviews even the criticism so long as it's constructive.

Hey Matthew! Thanks for your pointers I'll definitely take them on board. I get distracted too easily when writing so I keep it short and sweet for fear I'll ramble ...

oh lord, apologies for my corrupted mind haha. no worries x

Just a few pointers from a girl who knows very little about poetry but enjoys the read. I enjoyed this poem overall but just feel it could be improved with ...

The others below seem a bit critical and I know their intentions are good but this is a vivid and intriguing poem that should not be altered by poetry "norms" ...