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hello E.E, Adrienne here for review (: GOOD POEM MY PAL!! however there were a few flow issues. like "So, I wake and here you are, To only greet loudly, ...

Hello Adrian here to review your poem (: this is a good poem and i love what you're trying to get across i just feel that the flow could have ...

Hello Adrian here for a real quick review (: now i really did enjoy this poem as a quick read however i'm not entirely sure that i know what it ...

Hello E.E I'm here to review your poem (: I l o v e your acrostic poem theme, it's lovely. I also love your use of close rhymes and in ...

Hello I'm here to review your poem a little (: Alrighty, so. you have already improved quite a bit! in fact this is a very good poem. there are still ...

Hello E.E I'm here to review your poem a little (: BACK AT IT AGAIN WITH THE ACROSTIC FORMAT I SEE. N I C E. okay now that I'm done ...

Hello I'm here to review your poem a little (: okay so the only thing that bothered me about you poem was the flow. I feel as if some of ...

Hello I'm here to review your poem a little bit (: WOw fReN THIs iS ReALLy SPooKy seriously though I love it. I've always loved acrostic poems, and noW I ...

Hello I'm here to review your poem a bit. okay so just going right into it. there are a few flow problems and spelling errors. I don't know if you ...

Hello I'm here to review your poem a little (: I really loved this poem. It's so straight to the point and brutally honest. with that aside lets get into ...

Hello wordwing I'm here to review your poem a bit (: okay let me start of with saying THIS IS SO FUCKING REAL THOUGH? like I get where you're coming ...

Hello I'm here to review your poem (: okay so first off, I can slightly relate to this poem as I am Demisexual. I get where you said ' "It's ...

Hello I'm going to review your poem a little (: holy shit you wrote this when you were in fifth grade?? please share your talent??? Like this is so good, ...

Hello Empires I'm here to review your poem a little (: lets dive right in. okay so, this poem is really amazing. You got your message across so well without ...

Hello I'm here to review your poem (:. Okay, this poem is amazing. The format is very clever and i really enjoyed it. Then the poem itself was nice. I ...