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Re: never win again
First off, I want to start by saying you bring up some very deep thoughts and ideas about winning and losing within the piece. It’s well written, with a relatively ...
Feb 1, 2021 -
Re: The Shadow Of Respect
Oh. My. God. First off, let me just start by saying I’m blown away by how beautifully crafted this poem is. I can tell a lot of work has been ...
Feb 1, 2021 -
Re: A bridge of old poetry aflame
This is so incredibly beautiful. It’s choppy but somehow it flows so well, even as it switches from line to line. They all feel as though they connect to an ...
Feb 1, 2021 -
Re: Seven Days (Part 1)
I absolutely love this story! Your choice of vocabulary is very advanced, and the imagery this piece provides really helps the reader to see it through Carol’s eyes. One thing ...
Jul 2, 2019 -
Re: Social Monsters
Both pieces are so beautiful and emotional. They both really hit you with the desperate state our society is in, and the pain and anguish one must suffer to survive. ...
Jul 2, 2019 -
Re: Autism Is Not A Deformity
I love this poem so much. As person who has a sibling with autism, the subject really touches me. My brother doesn't fit a lot of the stereotypes of autism, ...
Jul 2, 2019 -
Re: if only you weren't so afraid to fly
This is such an interesting piece. It has a lot of thought-provoking statements, as well as a lot of interesting ideas and takes on things. I especially love the line, ...
Jun 5, 2019 -
Re: i n c a s e w e d o n t e x i s t
This is a beautiful piece of poetry, and really carries the reader on an adventure with the narrator. The depths of your imagination are limitless and you push the reader ...
May 30, 2019
