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Re: A place called there
Heyyo! Just dropping in to leave a few of my thoughts on this piece! SOOOOOO first off, I want to say that you set the tone for the poem quite ...
Jun 14, 2021 -
Re: The NETWORK.
Wow! So first off, what a unique and powerful idea you've stumbled upon and created! I've never read anything like this, and the format is absolutely spectacular! Everything feels like ...
Jun 4, 2021 -
Re: chickens make mornings better
This is literally one of the most beautiful and precious things I've read. If I'm being honest, I clicked on it expecting it to be silly poetry, but it turned ...
Jun 4, 2021 -
Re: One Missed Train
So I read this last night and only realized now (24 hours later) that I hadn't actually left a review like I intended to. (Oops!) My thoughts may be a ...
Apr 25, 2021 -
Re: an introduction to origami & heartbreak
Whoa-- so first off let me say that this is a beautiful poem. I think I'm just going to go through and say the meanings I picked up on, my ...
Apr 25, 2021 -
Re: Forest of the Lost
Heyyo! Winter here to leave a review. First off, welcome to the site! Now to get down to your poem... So I tend to go through chronologically as I’m making ...
Apr 23, 2021 -
Re: Afterword [The Mandalorian] Ch. I
Wow! I have so many thoughts on this, the first being that it’s amazingly written. I’ve never heard of someone doing an idea like this, especially with pre-existing characters so ...
Apr 23, 2021 -
Re: King of the Court [Chapter 3 + 4]
Ooh! I have many thoughts on this : D Okay so this is going to be out of order, but I must say, the inclusion of the name gave me ...
Apr 23, 2021 -
Re: King of the Court [Chapter 2]
Hey Yoshi! I was excited to see that you were the author of this, and definitely excited to read it! Okay, so first off-- it's a very interesting premise. There ...
Apr 23, 2021 -
Re: Captain MacKinley's Diary: 15th January 1768
Heyyo! Just popping in to review! So first off, this is a beautiful period piece, and I loved getting to read it. The subtle language really makes you feel like ...
Apr 23, 2021 -
Re: Only U
First off-- I want to say that this is a very interesting rhythmic pattern that I sincerely enjoyed. There were moments when your choices surprised me and yet they still ...
Apr 23, 2021 -
Re: Sanders Sides Oneshots (pt. 1)
Okay so I'm a sucker for Sanders Sides, and when I saw this was in the Green Room, I had to check it out. First off, I love how short ...
Mar 22, 2021 -
Re: Resist
First off, it's a bit late, but welcome to YWS! Secondly, I love how simple this poem is and effective. It's vague enough that someone could reasonably apply it to ...
Mar 17, 2021 -
Re: x divided by 0 is undefined
I actually clicked on this and thought it was regular math at first. Silly me. So yes, this is poetry and it is quite obvious once I get over the ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: A New Adventure
This is so personal and yet deeply touching; I cannot imagine what you’ve gone through or what Chris went through; my own personal mental issues that I may struggle with ...
Feb 5, 2021
