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Re: "I am a LITTLE BOY"
Ah, I get it. Hey, Will here, for a short review of your poem. You know, I really see where you're coming from with this. I really liked the way ...
Oct 5, 2015 -
Re: The who
#thatendingdoh Hey, Will here, for a review of your short story. I wanted to give you a fair chance and give you a better, more in-depth review of your work. ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Prologue: Waxie *NOT YET EDITED*
Merry Christmas! A few months early, I know... Hey, Will here, for a review of your work. I saw this work in the 'shorts' section and decided to check it ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Comic Sans
Yeah! SCREW YOU COMIC SANS. Hey, Will here, to relate to your hatred of this font. I hate it when people use comic sans. Calibri is another one I hate. ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Ruthless Killer | Unedited
The title fits very well to this story. Hey, Will here, for a review of your short. You know what makes a good short? I've said this many times before ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Dream Sequence 2/5
I'm back. And guess what? This chapter was even better than the last. Hey, Will here, for a review of your story. You know, I find it odd that you ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: The Boneyard
Wow, this was an epic piece. Hey, Will here, for a review of your work. WOW. No, not wow. WOW. Seriously! I was so engrossed in the book itself, that ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Introspection\\ Wandering Thoughts
Short and effective - what I look for in a short. Hey, Will here, for a review of your article. Now, firstly, I'm going to refer to this piece as ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Dream Sequence 1/5
R/N: This review is filled with nitpicks. Woah. That was awesome. Hey, Will here, for a review of your 'dreamy' story! - puns: not for Will So, I really liked ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: Elite Defender #1
ERMAGERD. Hey, Will here for a review of- ERMAGERD HALP. MY BRAIN IS FREAKING OUT. I love it. I love it so much. This chapter is so 'my thing' y'know? ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: [Insert Dramatic Title Here]- Chapter One
Hey, Will here for a review of your very interesting story. I really liked this story. It was interesting as it reflected real life, and also because it isn't just ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: the dream of the end
#deep Hey, Will here for a review of your work! Well, you're new here, Destoni, so I'm going to cut you some slack. But still, this wasn't a good quality ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Child not bride
Wow. Perfect. Hey, Will here, for a short review. This was one of the deepest and saddest things I've ever read in my life. Coming from an Indian background, I ...
Aug 20, 2015 -
Re: Mission 1:Trouble lover
WOAAAAAAAAAAAAH. Epic. Love it. Hehe. Get it? 'Love' it? Hey, Will here, for a review of this epic sounding chapter. From when I first read it, I knew I would ...
Aug 20, 2015 -
Re: Oh my maggi!!
Ah, Maggi noodles. The work of art. Hey, Will here, for a review. *mouth waters* Anyways, back to the review. I personally loved your work. I see how you've put ...
Aug 20, 2015
