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Re: the mourning routine of a grieving person
This is such a sad and lovely piece of work! I could relate to the narrator, you, right from the beginning. You create that sense of familiarity very well, for ...
Jan 29 -
Re: My Sun
Heyy Alex, I read this beautiful poem aloud to myself, and it felt like a gift. It's so long, but it never loses its richness for a single moment, surely ...
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Re: Evelyn (haven't decided a title yet)
heyy MirOl, First of all, warmly welcome to YWS!! It's great that u felt this mysterious urge to write a story: it's something also I can relate to 😊. And ...
Jun 15, 2025 -
Re: Young Butcher
Heya :) There's something about your short stories that really stands out! This specific story was pretty disturbing(take that as a compliment), and how in the world did you come ...
Jun 7, 2025 -
Re: Point in Time
Heyy there! Warmly welcome to YWS :-)! I tried picking my favorite line from your piece of literature. Unfortunately, all of the lines were so good, I had to select ...
Jun 5, 2025 -
Re: The Snake
WOW!! This story may as well belong in a collection of short story classics! I like the continuous flow of the story, from getting thrown suddenly into it, to the ...
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Re: Crossing the Rubicon
Woah, this story actually took me back in time!! I like your elaborative vocabulary which suits the context and also the rhyming words
May 5, 2025 -
Re: A Recipe For Murder
Haha XD! Now I think YWS should also have a devoted genre named 'Recipes'! Seriously, it's rather clever and funny that you wrote this thing in the form of a ...
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Re: S.O.S.
One of the best poems I've read in a long long time! You tell a deep story and convey a strong message using only two stanzas! You balance the story ...
May 3, 2025 -
Re: A glowing path to home
Wow!! I got embraced in your story from the beginning to the very end :) The start was brutal, and I felt sorry for the characters. But then the story ...
May 3, 2025
