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  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: the mourning routine of a grieving person

    This is such a sad and lovely piece of work! I could relate to the narrator, you, right from the beginning. You create that sense of familiarity very well, for ...

    Jan 29
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Sun

    Heyy Alex, I read this beautiful poem aloud to myself, and it felt like a gift. It's so long, but it never loses its richness for a single moment, surely ...

    Aug 18, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Evelyn (haven't decided a title yet)

    heyy MirOl, First of all, warmly welcome to YWS!! It's great that u felt this mysterious urge to write a story: it's something also I can relate to 😊. And ...

    Jun 15, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Young Butcher

    Heya :) There's something about your short stories that really stands out! This specific story was pretty disturbing(take that as a compliment), and how in the world did you come ...

    Jun 7, 2025
  • Other » Realistic, Romantic Re: Point in Time

    Heyy there! Warmly welcome to YWS :-)! I tried picking my favorite line from your piece of literature. Unfortunately, all of the lines were so good, I had to select ...

    Jun 5, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Snake

    WOW!! This story may as well belong in a collection of short story classics! I like the continuous flow of the story, from getting thrown suddenly into it, to the ...

    May 5, 2025
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Literature Re: Crossing the Rubicon

    Woah, this story actually took me back in time!! I like your elaborative vocabulary which suits the context and also the rhyming words

    May 5, 2025
  • Short Story » Horror, Humor Re: A Recipe For Murder

    Haha XD! Now I think YWS should also have a devoted genre named 'Recipes'! Seriously, it's rather clever and funny that you wrote this thing in the form of a ...

    May 4, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: S.O.S.

    One of the best poems I've read in a long long time! You tell a deep story and convey a strong message using only two stanzas! You balance the story ...

    May 3, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: A glowing path to home

    Wow!! I got embraced in your story from the beginning to the very end :) The start was brutal, and I felt sorry for the characters. But then the story ...

    May 3, 2025


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