waywardxwanderer

This poem is wonderful! It's done in a very simple and matter-of-fact style that perfectly adds to the point of it, and the effect is wonderful. "even though now" This ...

Ooohh I LOVE this!!! The cryptic nature of this poem adds a sort of daunting and threatening feel so something we're all truly quite comfortable with. The subversion of what ...

Oh. My goodness. I knew I HAD to read this poem the moment I read the description, and it did not disappoint. This entire poem is hauntingly beautiful, and your ...

WOAH. WOAH. !!!!! This is SO NEAT! I absolutely adore the way you've written this from the perspective of Death; it starts off wandering, like his mind, but grows focused ...

This is a very well-written poem! Throughout it, I could feel myself started to see things from Jackdaw's side and perspective - the words are spinning and confusing like the ...

Holy freaking cow. I'm going to be honest and let you know I didn't have super high hopes for this because of the title, but this IMMEDIATELY dashed my expectations ...

Silver. I'm sitting here with my mouth wide open in pure, unadulterated awe. This poem is absolutely incredible, haunting, mournful - perfectly written. The repetition of the word "somewhere" creates ...

Holy,,, wow. This poem is genuinely so beautifully written. It's not a topic I have experience with, nor one I'm very comfortable even thinking about, but this poem really brings ...

These are absolutely lovely!! I don't think I've ever heard of tanka before, so thanks for this! Your imagery is so peaceful and lovely, and I can vividly picture the ...

This poem. Oh my lord. Once again, you've done it. The feel of the words, the harsh consonants and acidity of the letters add such a haunting and oathlike feeling ...

This poem is so unique and beautiful,,, I love the way you compare interpersonal relationships to cosmic happenings. It's utterly enchanting. The layout of this poem is very unique, and ...

I realized I read this and didn't leave a review, but I don't think I even have the words to describe the way this poem made me feel. The way ...

I. Adore this. It's so hauntingly beautiful and uniquely written; it's incredible !! The shortness is befitting of the poem, and even after only eight lines, the ending hits like ...

This poem was.... absolutely incredible. I'm genuinely in shock. (Like the hula hoop, I have lost my marbles). Your extended metaphor of the hula hoop was very unique and creative, ...

This poem is... RIDICULOUSLY beautiful. I'm getting the feeling it was meant to be about Snow White? I love the ambiguity, though. The way you've formatted it, small statements of ...