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Hi Abigail_W, I didn't mind your poem and surprisingly I understood it. It is very short though and as a result of this it lacks a few things like depth, ...

Hi kingolions, I thought this great! Its very deep and powerful which makes a good poem. "You asked me why I was closed inside, but it was because I'd opened ...

Hey Kingolions, I really enjoyed this poem. I agree with redleaf, the concept and content is great! The only thing you might need to work on is the sequence so ...

Hi Snoink, I really love this poem. Although I don’t think it is your best work I still like it. It is very catchy, in fact in reminds me of ...

Hi BlackDahlia, normally I hate poems on love of 3 reasons 1) They are dramatically over emotional 2) They are way too long and get boring 3) They lack purpose ...

Hi Flower Child, I really loved this poem. It is fantastic, creative and dark all at the same time. I love the idea of the clock. It is very imaginative! ...

Hi Redleaf, I loved our review/ summary. It is gripping and makes people curious about the book while not giving too much away! I myself have read the 'The Alchemyst' ...

Hello CaptainRandom, I really enjoyed your poem. I think it speaks a lot of truth and I can tell you feel strongly about hating this teacher of yours. I myself ...

Hi Solvalery! HAHAHAHAHAHA, your poem has so much truth, its FUNNY! I think every person who is or has been a teenager can relate to this because everything you say ...

Hi R.O.C, I thought your poem was, interesting and descriptive. It was good, I can say that but I was expecting better. Like your other poems it did not tell ...

Hi Kingolions, I liked your poem simply for its simplicity! Like my short poemish thing I wrote, it is short, sharp, repetitive and gets to the point. I like the ...

Hi, R.O.C, I really really loved this poem. It is very creative how you have compared your self to the flower. An excellent personification! What I liked is the darkness ...

Hi ilyaeelz, I'm new to YWS! Thanx 4 reviewing my poem so now I will return the favor. Wow, your poem is quite weird but.... I LOVE IT. It just ...

Hi Fantasydotcom, I'm new to YWS! Thanx 4 reviewing my poem so now I will return the favor. I really liked your poem. It makes me think of everything that ...

Hi Truth, I'm new to YWS! Thanx 4 reviewing my poem so now I will return the favor. Firstly I strongly disagree with the others who have reviewed your poem!! ...