Published September 3, 2010
Yet another random poem. From a year ago. Trying to get a few differently written poems up so people can get a handle on my writing style. ^^
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Hi ilyaeelz, I'm new to YWS! Thanx 4 reviewing my poem so now I will return the favor. Wow, your poem is quite weird but.... I LOVE IT. It just drew me in with the first few words! It is not very relatable for obvious reason but it is a great poem. What I really enjoyed was the ending "empty again". Such an amazing ending sentence! You are very creative to write a poem about a cup, (I am terrible a poetry). Maybe you could talk a bit more on the cup it’s self and not what it contains but cups are to hold substances.
Thanx for a creative poem,
watchmeburn
I was amazed with the way this poem took something so simple (a cup of tea) and made it beautiful. The poem flowed very well and created a very colorful picture for the reader. My favorite part was the repetition of table to cup, it made me think of drinking tea as a very repetitious cycle. Overall this poem was awesome.
Thanks for commenting! The poem is literally just a 'day in the life' of the cup. No hidden meaning whatsoever.
I love this line. It flows very well, it's beautiful. The whole poem is!
I do have a question though; what is it about? haha. You seem very creative. I love when people can take the simplest thing and make it seem so... amazing. You're use of vocabulary is really good too, and I love the imagery! Please keep writing, never stop.