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Hey Chaser! Happy review day! This was a really good story and a fun read! Sometimes I was a bit confused by the POV but it all made sense and ...

Hey erilea!!!!! This was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!! (There aren't enough o's to prove my point lol :) ) In this part: "The barbed wire ripped free, and Ashia almost sobbed with ...

Hey 1nspire!! This was some really good poetry!! (Something I struggle to write myself :) ) I was wondering what rhyme scheme you wanted in this piece- as it is ...

Hey! I just wanted to add a bit of personal advice (you obviously don't have to take it) on your essay here! You often describe things very analytically- "remnants of ...

This is so powerful! And relatable... I've always wanted to be in a musical and I recently decided to try out despite that I'm self-conscious of my singing- but I ...

This is very spooky- perfect for the Halloween season! There are a few things I would change, however: #1. I would reformat this- maybe more like a poem? Bang! Bang! ...

According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way a bee should be able to fly. Its wings are too small to get its fat little body off ...

Hey! I really enjoyed reading this! I really like the aesthetic of hourglasses in general, and especially as a symbol. I think it was well done, short and sweet, and ...

Hey soundofmind! I really really love this! Like with my whole heart- this is amazing! I listened to the song that you linked to- that better not be you singing ...

This may be just me being an idiot, but in my opinion, the language used is a little flowery. I just read this and I don't really know what it ...

This is a really good story! This is kind of a tough story, but the accent of the main character really helps it not feel bogged down with flowery words ...

This was very good and gave me a happy and warm feeling inside! The only things i would change are simple formatting errors. For instance, you say that the woman ...

Wow! This was awesome! I really like how you used parallelism in the separated sentences, like I usually or she usually. I only have one small critique, and that would ...

Hey! This was really good! W H A T H A P P E N S? I have a few little critiques to make it even better, though! First of ...

I really liked the way that you constructed your poem! The tabs and the unique shape they create captures the reader's attention and makes them want to focus. I like ...