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Not as clear as it could be.

Thank you for that. Oh Passion! Never fear. For pasta is here.

It isn't that bad. I just can't recognize any clear story or anything for that matter. It's held together okay though and it flows smooth enough.

Oh now that. THAT was beautiful. Absolutly gorgeous. Wonderfully written and the feeling behind it. There's proper recognizable feeling behind it! So sad and sorrowful. Yet so (yes I am ...

There's not really much I can say about this except for I have no real idea exactly where that was going. Idea wise, all I got was a predator. Not ...

That was absolutly superb! Utter brilliance and genius. Congratulations! It sounded so pretty yet there was a touch of sadness shall I say, about it. All round, a beautiful piece.

I liked how you gave a description of her feelings and not just of what was happening. I believe the words 'short but sweet' would apply here. Are you intending ...

Sorry about it being depressing for you. You mentioned what they say at someone's funeral. The 'Dearly Beloved...' is actually used at weddings. My using it, therefore, is a bit ...

Thank you for your comments, they are much appreciated. I didn't base this on the twilight books. I have never even seen any of them in bookshops or libraries, let ...

It's a load of rubbish isn't it? My first attempt at seeing what happens when I force myself to write. The results were worse than usual. Thank you for leaving ...

That was very well written and thought provoking. I liked the repitition of 'try this on for size'. Really brings the message home. It sounded rather bitter and angry, or ...

That was so sweet it made me smile. It may only have been a few lines but it was still really good, lots of feeling in it.

It was a very interesting poem. Not the sort of poem I would normally read and like so congratulations!

“OK YOUSE TWO! BREAK UP THE LOVE AND ROMANCE! YOU SHOULD HAVE DONE THAT WHEN YOU WERE ALIWE!” A midget walked over to Amelia and the man she was with, ...

“I’m getting worried about her Charles. She isn’t home from school yet. I rang Amanda’s and asked if she was there. Those two are inseparable and her mother said that ...