Indecision

by alexandraisonfire
  • October 13, 2008
  • Poetry
  • Lyrical

Imagine standing on a fence,
Picket between each foot
Staring over the wall
Time to jump or drop

Picture two mirrors facing each other,
Can you fly or will you fall?
Watching others plunging
But I’m still alone.

I stare over the edge
Caught between living:
Unusual, ordinary
I stare over the edge
At both extremes,

And it blows my mind.


(this is probably rubbish - i dont know tbh)

Comments & reviews · 3
Note: You are not logged in, but you can still leave a comment or review. Before it shows up, a moderator will need to approve your comment (this is only a safeguard against spambots). Leave your email if you would like to be notified when your message is approved.

User avatar
vixeyt
Comment
vixeyt commented · Mon Oct 13, 2008 7:55 pm

Not as clear as it could be.

Random avatar
alexandraisonfire Comment
alexandraisonfire commented · Mon Oct 13, 2008 7:42 pm

it's kind of about making choices but i dunno if thats very clear?

User avatar
vixeyt
Comment
vixeyt commented · Mon Oct 13, 2008 7:41 pm

It isn't that bad. I just can't recognize any clear story or anything for that matter. It's held together okay though and it flows smooth enough.



Don't go around saying the world owes you a living; the world owes you nothing; it was here first.
— Mark Twain