victorianlolita

I absolutely LOVE this poem! It's so symbolic (obviously) and so well put. I started reading this hoping to God it wasn't something stupid. I'm not a fan of stupid ...

This is nice and deep. I love the reverse ends, where it's not the girls tragic story being told, its the one who caused the pain. The reaching is a ...

This is a great poem. The imagery of beautiful, then dark, confusion and un-satisfaction is great. I am left not knowing the answer, but that puts me where the writer ...

I have written something that this reminds me of. I almost want to post it and let you read it. OH wait! I have it on Deviantart. Here's the link ...

It's odd. I love the meaning behind it, but it's chaotic. There is a difference between organized chaos and pure, down right , wtf is that, chaos. Your's leans more ...

This is very soft and short and sweet. It's calming and almost visual but ...not if that makes sense. The only criticism I have is the forth line "To travel ...

Amazing! I love the flow and how it's choppy ( in a good way.) It symbolizes the strife and insanity, confusion and pain that you further describe in your work. ...

OKay..I LOVE the hunger games...like...love...and was just like the hunger games. I had to stop reading a couple of times to take a breather ha ha. I am like the ...

This is a wonderful thought. I love how you took the meters and made them awkward. Bringing two thoughts from two sentences in one line. The only thing that I ...

I really can't 'critique' this. I simply love it. I love it's movement, it's reiteration, a subtle, powerful touch to each stanza. I adore it greatly. I also love how ...

This is a great poem. I LOVE the first stanza. The second one confused me. "Right when you thought the road stopped right there Right then you almost gave up ...

emmylove, This chapter is a good start. The plot is set and any one can relate to it. There are a few things that could use some jolt though. It ...