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Re: Child In Me - Collection of Poems
Hi! It's CATS387 leaving a review! This poem's title brought back memories, so I want to see what it is about! Let's start! The beginning is very good. It tells ...
Aug 4, 2025 -
Re: Under the Haze of the Sun
Hi! It's CATS387 leaving a review on this! The title caught my attention, and the description of it too! Let's start reading, shall we? The first paragraph introduces us into ...
Aug 4, 2025 -
Re: Witch’s Wonder, Hell’s Hate: Part Six
Hello again! It's CATS387 back with a review! This book made me wonder, what is it about? So, let's dive right in! The first and second paragraphs describe how her ...
Aug 3, 2025 -
Re: an AI cannot look into a mirror
Yes. AI, leave the writing and poems to humans, thank you very much! No matter how hard AI tries to beat us, the one thing they cannot do is beat ...
Aug 3, 2025 -
Re: Kingdoms: Pt 1
Lol, I read part two but not part one! It's CATS387 again, this time leaving a review for part one! Let's get straight into it, shall we? The first part ...
Aug 2, 2025 -
Re: Robo, I and Chess
Robots carry out orders and have no emotions. I love this poem. It looks like you spent a huge amount of time and effort into it. Robo is a robot, ...
Aug 2, 2025 -
Re: Marilyn Hart-The trouble of Carlos
Wow, the ending shocked me! It is really good. Carlo's love is dangerous and obsessive. Love and violence, mixed together. Never thought I would see that somewhere! I love how ...
Aug 2, 2025 -
Re: the conquering of my death
This poem is beautiful, and gives me hope. No matter what religion you are (I'm Christian) this poem will touch you with a feeling of faith and love. Like visions, ...
Aug 1, 2025 -
Re: Your Feedback Has Been Recorded!
It is so good! POV: AI and robots these days lol. In a way, it was kind of funny, like the last paragraph, it describes how they answer to a ...
Aug 1, 2025 -
Re: CAPS LOCK
Short and sweet. Love it! Honestly, it is so relatable. I love the format and how you wrote it, very good! As AlexWrites said, hits me as goofy and creative. ...
Aug 1, 2025 -
Re: Kingdoms: Pt 2
It is so creative and original! I love the ending. Is the ending final? Or are you going to make a sequel or something? Anyways, it is so...how do I ...
Jul 31, 2025 -
Re: Blood-Bound (Chapter 3)
It is very descriptive and good! The last paragraph makes me want to keep reading! The fact that you made this up is amazing! I used to try to "make" ...
Jul 30, 2025 -
Re: NERVOUS MACHINE
I love the onomatopoeia in this poem, like the start (click click tap scroll) I love the descriptive language and the personification, like "sometimes your pencil snaps in anger" is ...
Jul 30, 2025 -
Re: ceiling fan
Wow you spent a lot of time on the 'round' part! It is very good, and describes everything very clearly. The only part is that I found it difficult to ...
Jul 30, 2025 -
Re: To Paxaria: part 8.1
It is so good! It looks like you spent a lot of time and effort on this part. I am very excited to see what happens next! It hooked me ...
Jul 29, 2025