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Re: *some really poetic title*
Hey, (this is probably going to be extremely short) I really liked this, it shows a really interesting point of view. I found it really fun that you described tattoos ...
Jun 17, 2023 -
Re: the Liberty of another poem
Hey! If im being honest I first decided to read this because you said you were Dorothea, and evermore is in factory favourite album so I clearly had to read ...
Jun 17, 2023 -
Re: to touch a star
Hey, I absolutely loved this. I really related to it and almost cried. How you describe the feeling that your thoughts and feelings are bad and out of place and ...
Jun 17, 2023 -
Re: Delusional Love Colors
Hey there! I'm just writing a sort review. I really liked this, I personally interpreted it as someone who is in love but also is aware that they are romanticising ...
Jun 17, 2023 -
Re: A Dance That Never Was
Hello! I really liked this poem, it reminded me of "Cowboy like me" and "Gold Rush" both by Taylor Swift Mainly to gold rush, because you constantly imply that things ...
Apr 2, 2023 -
Re: Are you okay?
Hello! This made me cry, you can actually see hoy the narrator is desperate for help and to be able to escape their own reality. And also the repetition of ...
Apr 2, 2023 -
Re: A Kid
Hello! I loved this. You chose such a relatable narrator, and really emphasise the "I'm just a kid" because that's what everyone tells you, "You are just a kid so ...
Apr 2, 2023 -
Re: girlhood
Hey! I love this with all my heart. I think you just captured everything so perfectly. "I wore my heart on my back. Thats how you got me so quickly" ...
Apr 2, 2023 -
Re: I needed time and love
Hey! I can't explain how much I love this. This poem really shows how it feels not being able to love someone the way they expect you to. And then ...
Apr 2, 2023 -
Re: Broken mirror image
Hey! I really believe that this is awesome, mainly the "Zara continued to shut herself off from the world and began to focus on her anger. It consumed her completely ...
Mar 30, 2023
