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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: *some really poetic title*

    Hey, (this is probably going to be extremely short) I really liked this, it shows a really interesting point of view. I found it really fun that you described tattoos ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: the Liberty of another poem

    Hey! If im being honest I first decided to read this because you said you were Dorothea, and evermore is in factory favourite album so I clearly had to read ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: to touch a star

    Hey, I absolutely loved this. I really related to it and almost cried. How you describe the feeling that your thoughts and feelings are bad and out of place and ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Delusional Love Colors

    Hey there! I'm just writing a sort review. I really liked this, I personally interpreted it as someone who is in love but also is aware that they are romanticising ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: A Dance That Never Was

    Hello! I really liked this poem, it reminded me of "Cowboy like me" and "Gold Rush" both by Taylor Swift Mainly to gold rush, because you constantly imply that things ...

    Apr 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Are you okay?

    Hello! This made me cry, you can actually see hoy the narrator is desperate for help and to be able to escape their own reality. And also the repetition of ...

    Apr 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: A Kid

    Hello! I loved this. You chose such a relatable narrator, and really emphasise the "I'm just a kid" because that's what everyone tells you, "You are just a kid so ...

    Apr 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: girlhood

    Hey! I love this with all my heart. I think you just captured everything so perfectly. "I wore my heart on my back. Thats how you got me so quickly" ...

    Apr 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: I needed time and love

    Hey! I can't explain how much I love this. This poem really shows how it feels not being able to love someone the way they expect you to. And then ...

    Apr 2, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Broken mirror image

    Hey! I really believe that this is awesome, mainly the "Zara continued to shut herself off from the world and began to focus on her anger. It consumed her completely ...

    Mar 30, 2023


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