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  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: To My Family

    Wow. This is an amazing and raw poem. I was instantly drawn in. Firstly, by sight, the way the letter spiral down astounds me and I find it very creative. ...

    Oct 31, 2025
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Where have all the little Boys and Girls gone?

    This is a very moving poem and I may have interpreted it in a different way as intended, but nevertheless it is very insightful. What I took from this poem ...

    Oct 31, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Staring at the sun

    Really good poem. At first I thought it was a love poem, but I was pleasantly surprised to see that its not. (If I'm wrong please correct me.) I like ...

    Oct 31, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter One: Rule Number One: Don't Hack Your School Network. Or If You Do, Don't Get Caught.

    Nova's narration is humorous. Her dry humor is very funny and it resembles and relates to teenagers of this day and age. What Nova did even though it was technically ...

    Jul 17, 2025
  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: How I Learned To Lie

    First impressions: The title is what drew me in at first, and I stayed for the ride. A good title in my opinion is very attractive to me as a ...

    Jun 14, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: fake it till you make it

    Though short, this poem was deep and emotional, getting straight to the point. As a reader it really pinned me down and forced me to listen. I like the different ...

    Jun 14, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: A Strong Man

    This poem is very powerful, and it exposes the realities of being a man in this day and age. I really like the way you said "this sea we call ...

    Jun 14, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: My Dark Angel: part of chapter 1

    This story was a good start. I feel like you could've explained of at least linked what you meant at the start when you you asked "Do you believe in ...

    May 23, 2025
  • Short Story » Health, Teen Fiction Re: The opposites

    This story was really raw and emotional. I related with Evalyn a lot. I love how Evalyn's name meant life and Azrael's name meant death as this was very creative. ...

    May 23, 2025


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