untalentedwriter

I have to say I really liked it. The writing I thought was excellent. I have to agree with the comment about how some of the lines didn't really fit. ...

Well hello! I agree with the comments above. And you should start to review. It's quite fun and it helps other writers learn about what they need to work on ...

I was also wondering if this poem was about snow white. I liked how everything in the poem flowed. It had a pretty Nice rhythm to it. I have to ...

Well first off Hello. I have to say I really liked this poem. It was different and intriguing.The tittle instantly caught my attention. I like the last stanza the best! ...

I have to agree with the first comment. I didn't really get how everything worked. I did like your choose of words. Like irksome! I did like the repeating of ...

I agree with the other comments. The last stanza needs a bit of work. I loved the first stanza it made me smile for some reason! I also liked the ...

I liked this poem because it was different. All the words flowed quite well with each other. The poem made you want to read it. I read it about four ...

The poem was Okay, but I have to agree with the other comments. The poem needs to be a bit more imaginative. The readers need to want to read the ...

I have to agree with the others your poem was so good. The vocabulary you used was perfect and described everything perfectly. I really liked the flow and how everything ...

I really liked this poem. I loved how the words rhymed. Though I also have to agree with the the first comment about it sounding kinda forced, but all in ...