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I liked the last stanza Its what had caught my eye the most For some reason I always like the ends of poems

i have to say i didnt feel anything at all nothing hit me no feelings and what r feline fflowers?????????

who would balance a cigarette on their forehead???????? that makes absolutley no sense. Is she that idiotic that she feels the need to almost burn herself? and its right before ...

thx guys at first this was a lesbionic poem just made for fun instead of goes and knows in the last stanza, i had is and liz and a couple ...

i liked the end not to make that mean but i did like the end well i liked the last phrase there thats better much better

omg i was cracking up it is nothing like the book but so stupid its hilarious

well u spelled their wrong or at least u got it confused you put there and its supposed to be their im big on things like that i actually hate ...

"Son, always be a good boy, don't ever play with guns," That should be 'Son, always be a goos boy, don't ever play with guns,'

He was radiating with power, his entire aura attuned to a frequency to strong for the young demon.. it should be too strong and not to strong

it was good rele good actually is that ur true story or is it just ur immagination exceeding to a hight limit? if you actually have a place in your ...

My friend and her friend were raped when they were four years old. Now my friend treats men with every ounce of respect I think that you ahd the right ...

i only read that one book but i was touched by it so much. I was just something that kept me reading and writing at the same time. The feelings ...

i think its a fantastic story and i want to know more about it

This is really good! do you have any other writings for that or is that just an idea because i would like to read more about it

That was fantastic and i couldnt stop reading it! Who am i to judge right? well i think that you should continue because obviously, you have talent and a fantastic ...