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thank you for your review! I'll definitely take those changes into account :)

no, it's great! definitely don't worry about that :)

hahah, I love this :D

wow.... I don't know what else to say besides just WOW.

I love this poem. It's relatable and sounds beautiful when read out loud. Great job. :)

haha don't worry! I didn't know what a tanka was at first either :P

hi! thank you for your review :) the placement of "And I am at home" was, for one thing, following the syllable structure of a tanka. I didn't use titles ...

hi! thank you for the review, but the reasoning (as you guessed) for the shortness of the poem and lack of stronger adjectives is because of the syllable count :) ...

the first part is short because it is a haiku so it is 3 lines :) and I'm actually writing about spring flowers! I try to never say what I'm ...

Haha! I just love the light, humorous feel of this letter. Great job!

It's okay. I'm not looking for any drama on here; no hard feelings. :)

I'm sorry, I didn't mean for this to be a personal issue... I'm just very up-tight about grammar. If there is a symbolic reason for the grammar then I respect ...

aw! don't cry!! I'm glad you like it though :D

thank you! I was just thinking about changing the 11:59 in a few lines :)