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hey scandalous, well thanks for the review and welcome to YWS, hope you enjoy here...and thanks for telling me my flaws I will surely do something about :)

thanks asma

I know asma...but thanks for telling me anyways :P

it already has a melody , I always sing and write my songs that's why they turn out this way...thanks for the review and glad you liked it :D

no it is sleeping...not sleepying... please correct your spelling mistake asma

welcome, keep writing and you know do you want some helpful suggestion because I am kind of a consultant I will tell you one quick remedy but you have to ...

hey wait I got it... The reason she hates him is mentioned here tooo....she hates him because he is the only person who has ever ignored her...thats what she shouts ...

I must say this piece is amazing...I can totally understand what you are trying to convey, your message is very clear and I can evem get your feelings when I ...

thanks for the review and glad you liked it...:D

as you wish...the next time I visit you I will make sure to ring the bell on the 2nd floor :P

lol now that was a review...wait till I send this song to E-C and say how much you LLLLLOve him lol...3:)

hey firefighter, glad to know you and your friend enjoyed this and looking forward to be your friend too...

I will try stella...actually I wanted to make a story like before and so I thought why not just do it even if Its common in the beginning ....but I ...